smothing spooky

by hannah
(west jordan utah)

Me and my friend were playing in her garage when we started taking about ghosts and stuff not thinking any thing would happen but then i got a creepy chill go down my back and i said mayby we should stop taking about ghosts.

then my friend said lets play hide and seek i agreed so wile she counted i hid under a tunnel that leeds to the sewer wile i was in the tunnel i herd her or somthing else comeing as i ducked i saw a wierd shadow wich spooked me out so i ran out the only way to get out.

as i was running to the exit a huge bulder fell over the way out then i heard someone snarle sitting there in the dark noway out i saw thee brightest round glowing light as it flashed when i opend my eyes the boulder was gone.

i got out ran to my friend but whats wierd is my friend just finished counting almost like it never happend but it felt soo real from now tell now on i will never speek of ghosts!

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May 20, 2011
Not true- but good
by: Camille

First of all, I would like to give my introduction;
I'm Camille, expert in the paranormal, living in Chàmps Elysées, Paris, France.
Your story does not go/sound like a true story. But to tell you, I kinda like it.
Note- your vocabulary is very bad. I found many spelling/grammatical mistakes. Please improve.
P.S i'm really sorry if I hurted you in any way!
Best wishes,

Mar 23, 2011
by: connner

whatever not bleaving that:(

Mar 20, 2011
by: nunya

that sounds spooky and all but is it real or did u just do it for fun

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