Graveyard Spooks

by kiana storm carmack
(main, California, u.s.a. )

When I was 11 I was walking around with my friends on Halloween. And we were walking through a graveyard. Ya know, no big deal right? Or was it?

Well when we were walking we were ya know just goofing off. Then out of no where we heard this low, muffled moan. We stopped and we were completely still. Then after a few minutes we didn't hear it again so we kept walking around and we walked past this big tomb thing. And it was completely closed like cemented shut. Some of my friends took pictures but I didn't. Well after that we walked around for about another hour. Then we walked back toward the tomb. It was open. Then we heard the moan again. We twirled around and saw something run behind us. We screamed and ran. But one of my friends looked closer at the picture that she took and noticed a ghost in it. She gave me the description of it.

DESCRIPTION:
YOUNG, BLOND, LOOKED AS IF SHE WERE MURDERED, SKINNY, AND SHORT

The next day we went back to the graveyard-of course when it was day time. The tomb was cemented closed again. We read what the tomb said and looked up her name. Our description was right. We looked at her background check and saw that she had murdered a woman's husband and she was the one who murdered her. She was locked up in prison for the rest of her life.
If you EVER go to Tennessee DO NOT go into the graveyards because she is still looking for revenge


DO YOU BELIEVE IN GHOST NOW???


-Kiana Storm Carmack

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Mar 12, 2012
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Great story
by: Olivia

That story is really cool and scary!!!! I was wondering where in Tennessee that graveyard was because I live in Tennessee. Thanks

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